My narrative

-Original story line-

The narrative for my trailer will start out as a shot of a new mother and father and their new baby boy (Patrick).  It will then flash forward to when the child is about two and is seen to frequently have psychotic rages and is extremely violent. The parents unable to cope with this give the child away for adoption/ mental institution. We then see the boy over the next 15 years later his behaviour and his obsession with his old family are becoming increasingly worse. We finally land 16 years later when he is in his 20’s and can legally set himself free. He appears to be ‘normal’ again convincing the doctors that he’s stable enough to live his own life. This is in fact untrue. He finds the house where he used to live only to find that he has been replaced. Patrick then has a ‘episode’ and plans to kill his replacement in order to come home...

Ryan the ‘new brother’ feels as though someone is watching him and following him and he seems to be becoming more and more paranoid by the minute. His girlfriend Lydia is feeling more worried about him and for him is punished for doing so by Patrick and she is his next target.

 

-The development-

My main victim Ryan will be experiencing a lot more paranoia and disturbance in his life. The killer will be playing mind tricks with Ryan and making him believe things are happening when they are not, the audience will be made to believe that Ryan is lying or seeing things by having the other characters not believe him and dismiss his ‘cries’.